Classmate Response: Week 3 – Joshua’s Poem ‘Rift on Sublime’

I think Joshua has done a good job in writing a poem using the recursive method. While there was repetition in his poem, it was not too much and made a lot of sense. He was able to challenge the use of the word sublime and has incorporated very well in the poem. I especially like the line, “Like leprechauns leaping like lemurs lapping liquid LSD” and think that he could maybe use this line as a prompt for another poem in the future.