I enjoyed reading Angela’s poem and I think she did a very good job in defamilirizing herself when writing this poem. It is especially great considering she wrote it within the time frame of ten minutes or less that we were given in class, but I think she could maybe work on expanding it a bit more later. She can use more colorful language to expand batter and cake which she had used in the second stanza of the poem.
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